Millie1514@HNP
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Sentence Types
Sentence types 30th March
Opener sentences
Although it was dark, we could see the glow worms.
Unless torches were shining in the cave, we saw the crayfish .
Before we went caving ,we got covered up.
Before we burst with excitement , we fall of the wooden pole.
Serial Patten
We walk into the cave , ready to scream, slip or cry.
Issy was crying , talking, screaming and moving.
In the dark cave, wetas crawled , crayfish swam then saw daylight ..
Interrupter sentence
While we climb through the, Rocky, Hard wall adults watched us. !
We yawn out to bed, tired, lazy, adults told us hurry up. !
While we watched the orienteering being set up, we got ready to run.
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Writing
Wednesday 18 November 2015
My sense poem
GYMNASTICS
Oh no dry lungs again tasting the cold air as well as watching the girls and thinking i wish i could do that, feeling sweaty,feeling like i have been smoked down, as i hear the rain thrashing down like another month is magically appearing.
Oh no dry lungs again tasting the cold air as well as watching the girls and thinking i wish i could do that, feeling sweaty,feeling like i have been smoked down, as i hear the rain thrashing down like another month is magically appearing.
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Writing
Friday 4 September 2015
Monday 17 August 2015
Wednesday 24 June 2015
Rain rain go away.
OK that day
People sick and tired waiting for the rain to finally stop
Will we wait till Christmas or nearly until December The 30th.
I have to say everyone is weary
outside is cold, windy,wet with puddles everywhere.
Children pushing teachers
can we go outside for play at Least,
Rain is falling wind is blowing in my pale blue eyes .
Raining bad
horrible weather.
Cold, windy not frightening not scary
winter is the freezing Part of the year.
Winter pours rain nearly every day
smooth and clear that's Water for you.
That unfortunate lady of Millie.
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