My sense poem

                                                             GYMNASTICS

Oh no dry lungs again tasting the cold air as well as watching the girls and thinking i wish i could do that, feeling sweaty,feeling like i have been smoked down, as i hear the rain thrashing down like another month is magically appearing.

                                                             


                                                                     

GM STORY BOARD FROM MILLIE

Millies Voki

Rain rain go away.

OK that day

People sick and tired waiting for the rain to finally stop

Will we wait till Christmas or nearly until December The 30th.

I have to say everyone is weary

outside is cold, windy,wet with puddles everywhere.

Children pushing teachers

can we go outside for play at Least,

Rain is falling wind is blowing in my pale blue eyes .

Raining bad

horrible weather.

Cold, windy not frightening not scary

winter is the freezing Part of the year.

Winter pours rain nearly every day

smooth and clear that's Water for you.

That unfortunate lady of Millie.

  

show not tell

 Within 15 mints
we got to the sports park ready to Learn some new skills .

We talked we ran and did what kids do when we’re excited.

We strongly bounced out the bus

I was  

Extremely

Excited,

Had butterflies wondering If I would fall off,

Screaming in my head hooray I Was dead in the middle of the hose And lindell said, “Nice one.” Trust me I was very happy .

And then

And only then

Going up hills

Windy

Bumpy

Wobbly

Fast

And a lot of taking over .

We

Stop

Wait

Look up.

STOP

Everyone come down remember eyes up pedal taps and focus.

Game time remember to put your thing you're riding on the other side of the chain.

The Movies was usual enough

The Movie’s was usual enough, it had

Popcorn, ice blocks, ice cream, jack Russell terrier, barking Along , It even had lights that fade out when the movie Starts.

Me Meg, Jack did what Karen told us to do.

Be quiet, pay attention and no popcorn we will make that at Home.

And we missed 10 minutes of the start of the movie, made Popcorn, made a smoothie that was very watery, last of all it Has to happen Patsy megs dog scratched me on my hand .

Doing nothing important.