show not tell

 Within 15 mints
we got to the sports park ready to Learn some new skills .

We talked we ran and did what kids do when we’re excited.

We strongly bounced out the bus

I was  

Extremely

Excited,

Had butterflies wondering If I would fall off,

Screaming in my head hooray I Was dead in the middle of the hose And lindell said, “Nice one.” Trust me I was very happy .

And then

And only then

Going up hills

Windy

Bumpy

Wobbly

Fast

And a lot of taking over .

We

Stop

Wait

Look up.

STOP

Everyone come down remember eyes up pedal taps and focus.

Game time remember to put your thing you're riding on the other side of the chain.

The Movies was usual enough

The Movie’s was usual enough, it had

Popcorn, ice blocks, ice cream, jack Russell terrier, barking Along , It even had lights that fade out when the movie Starts.

Me Meg, Jack did what Karen told us to do.

Be quiet, pay attention and no popcorn we will make that at Home.

And we missed 10 minutes of the start of the movie, made Popcorn, made a smoothie that was very watery, last of all it Has to happen Patsy megs dog scratched me on my hand .

Doing nothing important.

Dear Santa

Dear Santa,

Merry Christmas

How are you?

Are you excited for Christmas.

What have you been doing this year.?

I hope you elves are good and energized for Christmas.

My family are extremely excited for Christmas.

My favorite Christmas so far was last year when I got my laptop.

On that Christmas we went to the beach and we took the mini barbecue we cooked Sausages,pizza and burgers .

My Name is Millie i am 8 years old I've got 1 sister 2 brothers one of my Brothers is Charlie and my other Brother is George sister is Lauren Mum is Joanne And Dad is Danny.

  Santa can i please have some these things.

Id like a MPG scooter.

Tattoo pens .

Dresses

Bows.

Jewelry.

and a Zommer.   

 

From Millie

 

X-Men

Umbrellas

Tigers

Gymnastics