Wednesday, 25 May 2016

Inspiration
Loud to screaming
Amazing and fun
Excellent
Fun and amazing
Screaming to loud.
Inspiration.

Wednesday, 6 April 2016

Sentence Types

Sentence types  30th March


Opener sentences
Although  it was dark, we could see the glow worms.
Unless torches were shining in the cave, we saw the crayfish .
Before we went caving ,we got covered up.
Before  we burst with excitement , we fall of the wooden pole.



Serial Patten
We walk into the cave , ready to scream, slip or cry.
Issy was crying , talking, screaming and moving.
In the dark cave, wetas crawled , crayfish swam then saw daylight ..

Interrupter sentence

While we climb through the, Rocky, Hard wall adults watched us. !
We yawn out to bed, tired, lazy, adults told us hurry up. !
While we watched the orienteering being set up, we got ready to run.

Wednesday, 18 November 2015

My sense poem

                                                             GYMNASTICS

Oh no dry lungs again tasting the cold air as well as watching the girls and thinking i wish i could do that, feeling sweaty,feeling like i have been smoked down, as i hear the rain thrashing down like another month is magically appearing.

                                                             


                                                                     

Wednesday, 24 June 2015

Rain rain go away.
OK that day
People sick and tired waiting for the rain to finally stop
Will we wait till Christmas or nearly until December The 30th.
I have to say everyone is weary
outside is cold, windy,wet with puddles everywhere.
Children pushing teachers
can we go outside for play at Least,
Rain is falling wind is blowing in my pale blue eyes .
Raining bad
horrible weather.
Cold, windy not frightening not scary
winter is the freezing Part of the year.
Winter pours rain nearly every day
smooth and clear that's Water for you.
That unfortunate lady of Millie.