Monday 11 May 2015

show not tell

 Within 15 mints
we got to the sports park ready to Learn some new skills .
We talked we ran and did what kids do when we’re excited.
We strongly bounced out the bus
I was  
Extremely
Excited,
Had butterflies wondering If I would fall off,
Screaming in my head hooray I Was dead in the middle of the hose And lindell said, “Nice one.” Trust me I was very happy .
And then
And only then
Going up hills
Windy
Bumpy
Wobbly
Fast
And a lot of taking over .
We
Stop
Wait
Look up.

STOP
Everyone come down remember eyes up pedal taps and focus.
Game time remember to put your thing you're riding on the other side of the chain.

Friday 1 May 2015

The Movies was usual enough

The Movie’s was usual enough, it had
Popcorn, ice blocks, ice cream, jack Russell terrier, barking Along , It even had lights that fade out when the movie Starts.
Me Meg, Jack did what Karen told us to do.
Be quiet, pay attention and no popcorn we will make that at Home.
And we missed 10 minutes of the start of the movie, made Popcorn, made a smoothie that was very watery, last of all it Has to happen Patsy megs dog scratched me on my hand .
Doing nothing important.