Thursday, 18 December 2014

Dear Santa

Dear Santa,


Merry Christmas
How are you?
Are you excited for Christmas.
What have you been doing this year.?
I hope you elves are good and energized for Christmas.

My family are extremely excited for Christmas.
My favorite Christmas so far was last year when I got my laptop.
On that Christmas we went to the beach and we took the mini barbecue we cooked Sausages,pizza and burgers .
My Name is Millie i am 8 years old I've got 1 sister 2 brothers one of my Brothers is Charlie and my other Brother is George sister is Lauren Mum is Joanne And Dad is Danny.


  Santa can i please have some these things.
Id like a MPG scooter.
Tattoo pens .
Dresses
Bows.
Jewelry.
and a Zommer.   


 


From Millie
 

Wednesday, 6 August 2014

Holidays

Success Criteria


DEEP FEATURES
Brainstorms to identify main ideas to be used in writing.
Uses most of the main ideas in the writing.
Uses paragraphs and sequences ideas.
Attempts to end writing with a simple conclusions.
SURFACE FEATURES
Spells most words correctly.
Uses capital letters, full stops, commas, apostrophes, question marks, exclamation marks.
THE REWORKER / EDITOR
Rereads writing to edit out information that does not improve the message.
Rereads writing to edit in words and phrases that improve the message.
Uses a dictionary to identify and check spelling attempts.
Checks writing for basic punctuation.

My sister Lauren said “Do you want to play throwing games like throwing the tennis ball into the bin from the top of the hill?” I said “Ok, can I go first?”  “No your not.” so I said quietly “You're mean!”


Off we go to Inflatable World. Obviously my sister thought it was too babyish from the website but when she got there …
“Omg” she said and rushed over to get a band that said Inflatable World on it. Then she ran off playing anyway. I rushed over to the game that had blown up circle things and fighting pole things that you hit people with. Once I was fighting a 15 year old called Jake and I beat him by pushing him in the feet and he fell but it didn't hurt because the ground was inflatable.

“Yay!”


I get to go to Holly's house! Wait, what time is it? Mum said it is at 3:30. I said “Thats lucky.” I thought  I had my dance on that day. When I get there we are going to watch Flash Gordon and House of Magic. 
I said “We have got lollies.”
Holly said “We don't have lollies.”  So I sneakily brought some in my bag and said “I've got them.”
Holly said “What kind are they?”
I said “Party mix and candy canes.”
Holly said “Did you just say what I think you said? candy canes?”
“Yeah.”
Holly said “They are my favourite.”
“And I've got Freddos.”
She said “This is going to be the best sleepover ever.”


                  

Saturday, 26 July 2014

Stoney Creek Ranch Camp

A moment in time...

    Scary Night                                                                                        
 I heard my annoying brother snoring.
I heard the TV blaring.
I felt my toes shivering.
I felt my heavy duvet.  
I saw the wind howling.
I saw the rain pouring.
I wondered if the goat lead will come off.
I wondered if I will sleep walk.

 by Millie.

Queen Elizabeth 11

Tuesday, 29 April 2014

Scratch

In class I have been learning about the points of the compass and directions.

This week I learnt about a programme called Scratch which uses directions to create a little computer program.

My job was to use Scratch to create something that could be shared with the rest of the class. What my Scratch was about was all down to me and my imagination! I had to be creative!


Click on the green flag to start and the red octagon to stop.

When I grow up...

As part of our topic I have been thinking about myself and what makes me special. This has led to me thinking about what I would like to be when I grow up.


I made a ToonDoo about it.


Millie the gymnast

Swimming Sports

Swimming Sports is where the Year 4s, 5s and 6s at Havelock North Primary take part in swimming races in their houses. We then had to create a voki for homework about one of the races.


Our voki needed to tell the class about our favourite race at swimming sports and why we liked that one the best. We had to remember to hook our listener in and give the audience lots of interesting information.